Month: December 2016

Analyse a 2 stanza poem

December 8, 2016 / / 0 Comments

 

Are those her ribs through which the Sun
Did peer, as through a grate?
And is that Woman all her crew?
Is that a DEATH? and are there two?
Is DEATH that woman’s mate?
green shows rhyme to make the reader want to read on and shows a beat
blue explains the same as green
red shows repetition with death 
grey shows metaphor of her ribs which did peer of the sun

writing a story from unuasual words in the poem

December 1, 2016 / / 0 Comments

I was agaped to find myself betwixted in a jungle or the woods who knows?i might have been knocked unconscious on this day i was veered of what had happened to me.Later  after thinking i walked on into the jungle/woods on my walk i came across a loon who i walked passed him scared looking back every two seconds to see if he was coming later on i came across a mountain  which i climbed up when i was climbing up i heard owlets i climbed up further it was getting darker perchance i should climb up and sleep there for the night i reached at the top and set up to camp up there by morrow i was scarce with no food i walked on forgetting i was at the top of a 1289 feet mountain and i  perched over the edge will i survive or wont i survive?